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The Beautiful Isle of Bliss
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The Beautiful Isle of Bliss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The Beautiful Isle of Bliss Not that long ago, perhaps a year or so, I found myself on a beautiful isle bay that was very far away. In my thoughts an isle named Korea comes to mind, all the details are not clear today, but things were clear at that time. Upon this isle surrounded by silky shores I met a woman that I loved to adore. She wore a lovely white flower lei in her hair, other than that, nothing else did she wear. When we met, she spoke not a word to me. In her silence, she mesmerized me. Absolutely beautiful was she. We walked, then we stopped and kissed at a pagoda beneath a banjan tree. I knew if I kissed her my life would never be the same, but I could not resist her, my desire to blame. She motioned for me to close my eyes. She pulled me to a silky mountain stream. There she gave me a kiss that was so relaxing that I thought it was a dream. We melted together, successively becoming one with each new kiss, my desire begged me to get lost in her tenderness. In silky steams of bliss we shared a perfect kiss. From that day forward I have called this place the beautiful isle of bliss. Contented, we fell asleep in lovers arms that night. The isle and she were both gone by mornings light. No more bliss, no more perfect kiss. Someday we'll resume that kiss on the beautiful isle of bliss, once more to blend together in the arms of her silkiness. Until then I yearn for that day, those days of me and her and her flower lei. Some women, when you look upon their face, you know they are a special one that will take you to a beautiful place. JamesLee November07 2003 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-08-2003 07:35 PM).] |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
This i like wery much its so true smile.... -- Some women, when you look upon their face, you know they are a special one that will take you to a beautiful place -- Smile Jes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may bliss forever sing in your heart and may you be shipped away to an island of heavenly delight forever! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how romantic! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh James! Your images painted the most beautiful of portraits Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Your descriptions pull the reader in and make them want more. Well done! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear James, your "silky streams of bliss" are very captivating. Love, Margherita  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
*sigh* beautiful Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What Jes said. Those are the lines that I smiled at, as well... |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
James This is a beautiful poem great write Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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