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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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You leave too many thoughts lingering within me. I will yearn each night to dream of each kiss we shared, each night we dared to love and I'll wake, wanting, desiring that I cherish each dream as I stay and you leave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, such yearning and passion fills this write, sweet friend, but if she leaves, may she leave you with a smile! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is quite heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Your deep write was sad and well expressed. The nice thing about dreaming is that you can do it about anytime and for as long as you want. Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always leave too... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... dreams, memories... and ache. *S* And you wouldn't give up even the ache... for it's a precious reminder... I like this very much, Magnus. *S* |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You leave too many thoughts lingering within me. How wonderfully you opened this poem. The entire poem is well done! Patricia |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderful piece. I look forward to reading whatever you offer every time I open pip.  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...your sadness is wonderfully expressed... ~K~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written, spofty spoken, and hopes fulfill our days...forever...your love will someday be rewarded. Peace and happiness sent your way |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful rictameter this is, Barry. I love this form. Hugs  Ethel |
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