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Dancing the Broom
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Dancing the Broom |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Dancing the Broom another crumb fell wind swept to who knows where pushing things straight to the edge and you cleaning up being so brutally honest to the point of pain and I knew I was just another cookie in a jar that might not be pulled to ever dance the broom "Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I was just another cookie in a jar that might not be pulled to ever dance the broom" Some amazing lines there Helen. Really liked the visual this poetic dance created. And the line..."dance the broom"...excellent!  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
NO ONE should ever accuse you of being just another crumby poet! *grin* (Yes, I know I am weak. It is a good poem though.) |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
you are not just another crumb.... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
hmmmmm I expect you'll be caught up in the straws of well handled broom one day. I like the way you write. e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hugs sis |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
...still in awe.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice! Maree  fate is not just |
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