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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-11-03 08:27 AM



Should I Think The Worse

What does silence say
Its been difficult to decode
Was I emotional baggage
That you needed to unload

What does silence say
Was your interest waning
I am given no indication
How much was remaining

What does silence say
Have you any suggestion
Thoughts came to mind
Hearts begin to question

What does silence say
My heart lingers uncertain
Should I think the worse
Was this the final curtain


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-03 08:34 AM


HopeS
Silence can say many things. Good write.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-11-03 08:54 AM


there is always a softness to your words...this was beautiful
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-11-03 11:19 AM


Dear Hope you have such a gentle spirit, you touch the heart.
In silence lies truth.
Love and hugs. Margherita

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-11-03 01:00 PM


You know some don't realiz silence ruins so many things.we should always take the time to let someone know what were feeling.
Crystal

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5 posted 2003-11-03 01:34 PM


Dear Hope, I cannot help but think that you may be doing the same thing as he is doing ~ being silent. Perhaps you could open up the lines of communication. It could be that he may have been wondering how you have been feeling about him? Just a thought I have.

Whatever the scenario, I must say that you really touched me with your emotive write. May all be well in your world.

Loving hugs,
Linda

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