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mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
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a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-11-01 01:16 PM


kitchen tables, bedroom floors
your arms and my camera
thermosilk and ice cream
while singing in the sheets
saving you from your friends
by a tiny basement night light
your fingernails and pencils
in my hair
spanish stories
you and me at your locker
make me cards and letters
just because
kisses on my cheek
crying on my jeans
all night movies
on hardened couches
my side or yours?
windows letting daylight
waking to
your mom at the door
"time to go home now"
coming back later
for a project
falling asleep
again
morgantown and indy
living in the get up kids
your pj pants
are in my drawer
my songs
are echoing in your memory
your haircut
is still the same
my room
looks so empty without you
your achievement
looks so lost without
your smile
looks so nice without
the braces have come off without
remembering that
you were the best thing in my life

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

© Copyright 2003 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-01 01:53 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this made me smile as you depicted all the beautiful memories like a collage of your true friend, sweet friend, God Bless You, and may many more of these small but treasured memories continue to fill this collage of your heart! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rachael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-11-01 02:14 PM


This was a really neat poem!

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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