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stottbear94
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Living in Daddy's Eyes

0 posted 2003-11-01 11:38 AM


Witches and goblins and,
kids trying to scare
And some kids in costumes
with lots of hair
Gathering in masses
Attacking the streets
Hustling shoving
And begging for treats
moms and dads not having fun
wishing trick or treat was done
Kids snitching candy from the bags
Theyll eat so much candy they will gag.
The night is over
Children are finally asleep
Sugar rush, tummy aches, rotting teeth
Parents picking through the bags
And stealing their favorite treats.

Happy Halloween

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-01 11:44 AM




(smiles) Yay! I hope you and your dad had a wonderful Halloween together, sweet friend, this is an adorable and lovely debut, yay, I love it, hope you didn't eat too much candy and got them big tummyaches, LOL! Welcome to Passions, sweet Chester, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chester, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-01-2003 11:45 AM).]

stottbear94
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Living in Daddy's Eyes
2 posted 2003-11-01 12:00 PM


Thank you, but I have been here before. My daddy put it here. His name is Ringo.

Happy Halloween

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-01 01:48 PM


StottBear ~
This is just delightful ... and I am so glad to see you again~

HiDaddyRingo

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

Kethry
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4 posted 2003-11-02 10:26 PM


Stottbear, I see you have all the joys of halloween and you write about them so well.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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Saluting with misty eyes
5 posted 2003-11-02 11:57 PM


Noah- Thanks for the kind words, and the e-card... she got a MAJOR kick out of it.

Marge- Thanks. She really thinks everyone responding is so cool. lol

Kethry- Thanks for replying.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-11-03 01:22 AM


You know what, I can tell your a wonderful little girl just like your dad is wonderful.You two make a magnificent pair.The love, the talent, and the bond you share is wonderful to see.You truly are gifted.
Crystal

suthern
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7 posted 2003-11-04 12:08 PM


What a wonderful pairing... I enjoyed this very much and look forward to reading more! *S*
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-11-04 12:12 PM


Ah this is so great!!
I'm pleased to see you have joined us here with your dad!
I'm going to be watching to see you post more of your work!
~Big Hugs, Nancy~

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
9 posted 2003-11-04 12:14 PM


welcome to the family...does this mean...i'm a new aunt?...and keep writing we will keep reading...helen
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with you
10 posted 2003-11-04 12:19 PM


"Parents picking through the bags
And stealing their favorite treats."

laughing here....yes, I used to do that! Mine are too big for trick or treating now, so I just buy what we all like! welcome

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