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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-11-01 12:41 PM


My mother tells me
She smells decay
As we walk
To the car,
Getting ready to go
Anywhere but here.

I tell her
It smells like snow.

This is my favorite time of year.
When fall is dying,
And winter is being born.
Mournfull to see the colors go,
Excited that soon
You'll look up
And see the psychedelic pattern
Of snow
Zig-zagging down.

Not yet sick of the cold
Nor craving green.

Tears and smiles
Are the best lovers.

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
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b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-11-01 02:38 AM


i miss the snow so much, fall never dies here in florida
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-11-01 10:01 AM


Petre-

Aaaaw, I'm sorry

Thanks for the read and the comment, though

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-11-01 10:09 AM


Wow...!!

Eric

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-11-01 10:28 AM


Thanks Eric
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-11-01 10:31 AM


I would love to once see snow and the glitter I hear it has when the moon shines on it. I live too far south in Tx so I've never seen this except in pictures and in words. At best we just get a cooler fall. But no snow.
Love,
Terri~

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-01-2003 10:31 AM).]

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-11-01 10:36 AM


Tell ya what, for all of you who don't get snow...I'll trade places with you for the winter. LOL I'll be sick of all the white in a couple months anyway

Thanks Terri.

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7 posted 2003-11-01 11:14 AM




(smiles) Oh Lauren, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, though winter is not necessarily my favorite season, I do love the snow coming in every once in a while when it is a desert out here! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Edder
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since 2003-04-02
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8 posted 2003-11-02 11:54 AM


i love this lauren! it's wonderful to watch you grow in your poetry! luv ya!
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