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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-10-31 08:44 AM


Through the “huacas” fuse such wise keepers

Botanical gardens breathe celestial regions

Stunning rivulet where visions transform

Delving great mystic veils with lapping sounds

Of oceans paving our moments…poignant grace, earning day

Breathtaking finery sighs redeeming embryonic prose

Making portions glow….climbing subterranean dreams

I think are there, forever…proving wonders…looking on

Of earth’s finest prize review, bending with charismatic mind

White distinctive contributions…perceptive venues

Not of one point of view, but all of earths’ essence…

Gentle kindling fire…where springtime holds close

Tokens of yesterday’s destiny, revealing fresh sea green volume

Reminding the promise which warms in colors from deep down

Shy-soft, lively carved summer whispers carry like bubbles white

Mirroring…stretching a soft blue horizon with mortal human hands

Splendor, light and life, giving to the masterpieces of known contentment

Where you…live, flowing, with admiration and a wreath of bays

Most ingenious, is this verse which seeks with royal blood

Into the rare vein of mankind….joys which bud

With informal juncture…wearing the strongest eyes

Holding all my wondering thoughts…most bright

Airy fields of man….within such seas profound

Rich pearls, pink coral treasures enshrine…

Wishing you all sweet looks and star filled hues

Good Morning fellow Poets


© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-10-31 09:07 AM


LeeJ,
My favorite lines.
"Most ingenious, is this verse which seeks with royal blood
Into the rare vein of mankind….joys which bud."
Well done, enjoyed.

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-10-31 10:59 AM


well done
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-31 12:08 PM


Lee, each line could stand on its own!

Peace, Love & Light,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-10-31 01:10 PM


aw Lee, this is just beautiful

*wishing you the same*

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-10-31 01:20 PM


Wow, what a wonderful write!
Thank you, Lee, and good morning to you.

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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-10-31 01:51 PM


Wonderful, brilliant..
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