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Lonely Voyage |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Lonely Voyage how do I measure your distance it is with words breath and an ocean’s tears a riding of salty vacant tide a hollow echo back and forth pushing and pulling a heart rolled in to depart "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my, what a spectacular write but so forlorn. I am keeping this as it's so good! You are a wonderful writer Hugs, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ You ARE an amazing poetess~ Thank you for your *gifting* words~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
words adrift seek beaches to be counted among the sands but many languish just offshore and become a siren's voice |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
What a pretty, pretty poem! I have a feeling your voyage will be only as lonely as you want it to be. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sighs.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I ditto that sigh, with a bump, included. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Never with miles, no, never that -- nor inches. Distance is only measured with the spirit, and as you say in heartbeats, our own or heartbeats of the earth. Compared to those, neither miles nor years have any meaning. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sighs with raph and meg |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Helen, there's a feeling of void in this but this is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, may your voyage always be clear sailing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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