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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-24 08:46 AM



Earthquake

shake up
my world
tremble me
with the crumbing
earth moves
under quakes
surface vibrating
to the core
move me
absorbed in
no accident
from this
strong current
as we
collide

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-24 08:48 AM


terrific,,,

                                        

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-24 08:58 AM


YES!
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3 posted 2003-09-24 03:23 PM


shake up
my world
tremble me

Oh, yes! *S*

Like this much, I do! *S*

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-09-24 03:49 PM


I do this to alot of people but mostly cause i'm a fatty lmao
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5 posted 2003-10-02 12:49 PM


Yeow, what a beauty! Glad I decided to cruise the down pages, cuz I missed one fine poem.

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ctowen
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6 posted 2003-10-02 01:18 AM


Just knocked my socks off!!!!


     Waiting for multiple aftershocks.  

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7 posted 2003-10-02 01:27 AM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is sooooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, may you continue to shake in perfect harmony and feel the elements of the world rattle in your veins! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
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8 posted 2003-10-02 04:27 AM


hell, you rocked my world, lady ;-}

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

alisa
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9 posted 2003-10-02 02:16 PM


very very nice....
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