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Sadelite
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0 posted 2003-10-27 09:39 AM


She lived in fantasy’s kingdom
with Reality knocking down the door
carrying off her loved ones
to a place of evermore.

        Majestic simple lady
          with eyes of dancing hope,
           You glance away the ugly
             with your undying mental cope.

She donned weeping tiered halo crown
that conflicted with her eyes.
For in her eyes jesters played
whimsical  tunes worldlessly wise.

                Musical lady, you put my mind in quandry.
               Kindly divulge how you let all the uglies pass.
              Then tell us of your dancing secrets
             in your life of fantasy’s Camelot.

         Majestic simple lady
          with eyes of dancing hope,
            You glance away the ugly
              with your undying mental cope.

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GG
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1 posted 2003-10-28 01:51 PM


eyes of dancing hope sound so beautiful

I like this alot.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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2 posted 2003-10-28 01:56 PM


Brother, been there and done that!  Well done!

Try to make time to listen to
someone who talks with their heart.

Carpe' Diem

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3 posted 2003-10-28 03:35 PM


nodding and saying I have to agree with Sharon on this one....been there, done that, still doing it sometimes....lol.
very well done....

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