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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-10-27 08:00 AM

The nets where all stowed
The slight chop rocked them gently,
Homeward bound,
Homeward bound,
The stern mist carries swiftly
Gather fog as flowed,
Rolling in,
Rolling in,
Before the sun showed,
Followed into port quickly,
Rolling in,
Homeward bound.

Gloom

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-10-27 10:13 AM

This reminds me of those dark--dark nights, the fog rolling in the chill in the air.....almost spooky....I really enjoyed the images in this...

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-10-27 12:21 PM

Oh, my! ~ My poem inspired this lovely one? I am honoured, Dear Professor! Thank you for the compliment and thank you posting such a lovely poem. Your talent has many facets to it! ~ and I especially loved the facet that was illustrated with this right write!

Happy Halloween Huggums,
EA

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-10-27 12:26 PM

Gloomy, I so love sea tales! You did this so well!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-10-27 12:41 PM

nice write...made me feel like I was there

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-27 12:47 PM

Professor
Good metaphor glad you made port.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2003-10-27 01:43 PM

Thank you, Greeneyes,
Pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Earth Angel,
I am glad you like it,
It is so easy for me to think of the Sea,
Your poem was just the right spark this poem needed.

Thank you, Susan Caldwell,
So do I, glad you responded,
Sea tales, ahhh yes,
I remember once when talking to this little mermaid
a lovely creature with lovely blue eyes…

Thank you, passing shadows,
You are very kind in response

Thank you, Seymour,
Always nice to see your response under a poem of mine,
In fact I might use a touch of port a little later.

Gloom

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

7 posted 2003-10-27 07:10 PM

You write like you a sailor and poet, I would greet your ship arrival if the sailor had such a poem to share

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