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Swept Away...
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Swept Away... |
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Ku'uipo Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42 |
I felt myself get swept away, My feet taken from beneath me, No foundation, No higher ground, There lay no path, The incarcaration of a blind man, All lamps had fallen, lost their glow, Living redemption halted, Delusions of grandeur were left behind, Pure hearts diseased, Tomorrow vanished, Leaving an untouchable essence, Pawing, grasping, reaching for the void, Rediscover me, Victim of displaced hope, Child of silenced rage, Hold me to a perfection, Fear without faith, Efficiency, sufficiency, consistancy flawed, My weakness surveils as I fall to the floor, Bowed my head and secured my rest, I was swept away. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
nice and dark, i like it |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I used to be there myself as a child, sweet friend, I only hope no longer face this tug-of-war and now feel faith in all fear! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! nYou have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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