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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-10-24 09:37 AM



The Cold

He’s elegant and charming
His manner disarming
He always shows up uninvited
He strolls around with a sultry smile
He takes you by the hand
He send chills up and down your spine
He kisses your forehead with his heated lips
He is a musician
He knows how to play the drum
He enters your mind and plays in your head
He kisses your eyes and they begin to tear
He kisses your nose and it begins to drip
His goal companionship
He’s elegant and charming
He is everywhere
He may sit beside you on a crowded bus
He may be on the door handle you just opened
He may be in the sneeze that is coming your way
He may be on the skin of the boy you just kissed
He’s in the air, better watch out.
Ah............Chooooooooooooo!

The Chocolate Monster Has The Cold

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-10-24 09:41 AM


GOD BLESS YOU!  

Good write and imagination...hey, what boy were you a kissin?  

Hope your feeling better real soon!

Love and hugs Lee J.

Bonnie j
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2 posted 2003-10-24 09:47 AM


Lee J
I didn't kiss a boy, I caught that long legged postman. Ha......In my dreams.
Somebody must have sneezed.
See Ya
Love
The Chocolate Monster

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-10-24 12:07 PM


Great Job!

Eric

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4 posted 2003-10-25 10:14 AM



Sorry for the chuckling you hear, but this is too cute.  Hope your Chocolate Monster gets better soon, Bonnie!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-10-25 10:20 AM


Bonnie  
A delight to read, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2003-10-25 10:57 AM


Well, I'm sorry, Bon-Bon, that you have a cold.
I hope that you and your chocolate monster are better
real soon. This was just so cute, Bonnie.
Hugs  
Ethel

Jes
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7 posted 2003-10-25 11:58 AM


Smile i bet we all get a cold know.

its good i like it.

Jes


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8 posted 2003-10-25 02:00 PM


neat write
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