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mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
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a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-10-23 11:56 AM


my vocal chords are minor chords, never sound just right.
i choke on words but minor words, little meaning too much might.
i sing like the girl inside me is flying down my throat
trying desperately to hold onto something.
so many people trying to save her,
but they are sure to stay at a safe distance.
and i cough up another beautiful word.
and i speak like i seek something more from my soul.
yeah, i roll my tongue over my thoughts to shield them from the cold.
and i wait for a moment to surrender my anthem to the deaf ears that surround me,
but elapsed time means that the keeper of the moment-glass has found me.
so at my trial i plead the fifth lips sealed.
i look behind me and wish they knew me.
i wish they knew me when i could have coughed up a symphony for them.
so i take in deep breaths and open my mouth real wide,
and i feel a snag somewhere inside me-and that's when the sound comes out.
and i sputter my life out over the clutter of oohs and ahhs.
it's ugly to them, it's too much.
these blessable decibels push them to heights of discomfort.
and they try to save me with words like forget and peace.
they just can't see right past those words are the regrets of the deceased.
so if i sing too loudly, my deepest apologies, i'm sorry.
i'm sorry for them, the ones who can't see past my scattered english or my scarred helpless words.
i wish they'd see me.
i wish they'd stop asking why and how and when it all began.
i wish they'd see it's not the meaning of life that matters.
the reason i'm my thoughts are inarticulate and incoherently peeling,
is because i lack meaning, i only speak in feeling.

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

© Copyright 2003 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
1 posted 2003-10-23 12:12 PM


Are you sure of what you wrote there ???

this is my question inside and its just the match perfectly, ask all who know mee and they would say the same words stay calm and peace hehehhe, somehow this is funny or not --- cause its my life story the last years.

I could go on telling you that you hit the " thing " inside mee cause you did this i will not remember your words, but everytime i will think my life over again i will think of you. more than once a day.

Sorry my big message but this hit the truth to mee.

Smiles and thoughts

Jes

[This message has been edited by Jes (10-23-2003 12:14 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-10-23 01:31 PM


me too

me too

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