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D.Lester Young
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0 posted 2003-09-23 06:36 PM


Rainmaker heart breaker
soaring inner feelings
storming inside emotions
blossoming wind of romance
crashing down reality
feelings nature’s onslaught
light drizzle awakening
the hurricane’s rampage
drowning in self pity
feeling so abused
letting yourself go
feeling the wind’s caresses
effect your defenses.


D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 09/22/03


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-09-23 07:54 PM


It's a storm I know all too well.

Susan

kaleanna
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since 2003-08-18
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2 posted 2003-09-23 08:59 PM


good write, and a storm i know all too well

Meesh

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3 posted 2003-09-23 09:32 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This reminded me so much of the new Dave Matthews song "Gravedigger", sweet friend, with Dave in the video lying in the dirt of the grave praying for mercy! (sad sigh) I pray with all dear heart soon the Rainbow Dancer can again dominate and spread rainbows for everyone, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-09-23 10:40 PM


You let go like that, you don't know where you'll land. Maybe even right back in it.

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