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Open Poetry #29

A Moment's Thursday

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-10-23 10:53 AM

The chill invades once again
as I drown my sorrows in words past
rereading memories unbanded
stretching them beyond tensions hold
until they burst as tears of not understanding
this void I must live in.

Surrounded only by this hummm
and the lighting of thoughts once open
but now estranged, divorcing more
than just of he.

The pity seeps in, seeking in randomness
victimizing this heart of hearts
fleeced once too many, wondering
whatever happened to respect
and concern and regard...
and those words of
"as always"

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-10-23 12:32 PM

and those words of
"as always"

like death do us part,
words are sometimes archaic
sad to say
when they feel strange

peace and all

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-10-23 12:47 PM

Sweetie~
This aches~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-23 01:21 PM

I love that title...and love the poem even more, because I can relate

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