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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-10-22 07:23 AM


Intent

Her shadow rose upon the wall
Graceful seductive and tall
Beckoning in moves intent
To fly with her in dreamers vent

So my spirit rose and flew
Into a sky of primrose hew
On to a beach of snow white sand
And wiled a wile of oh so grand

There her shadow took its form
A beauty such as ne’er was born
A seem in perfect beauties light
All within an arms length sight


I clench her close about the waist
And then all seemed to turn to waste
Except the touch of my embrace
Where stays a pillow, in my face?

Some day I’ll dream her back again
And finish what I started then.



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-10-22 07:58 AM


well sir, your in rare form this morning I see/read....lovely words...sending along a very Good day to you sir...may all your dreams come true.  
Nan
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2 posted 2003-10-22 08:20 AM


Sy's world of dreamland... What a wondrous place it is...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-10-22 08:39 AM



You always want to finish
what you've begun...
besides, it will allow us
another poem!

Good morning, Sy!


Janet Marie
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4 posted 2003-10-22 08:42 AM


http://www.ouahad.com/songs/dream.php


"Sweet dreams till sunbeams find you
Sweet dreams that leave all worries behind you
But in your dreams whatever they be
Dream a little dream of me"

Louie~




*ww*

scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2003-10-22 08:44 AM


Well done Sy...you have interesting dreams.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-10-22 08:44 AM


I do hope you dream that dream again Sy...
so you can write us another few stanzas to this morning beauty.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2003-10-22 09:15 AM


but those dreams never have an ending...even when I try


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8 posted 2003-10-22 09:48 AM


liked this
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-10-22 10:02 AM


LeeJ
And may all your good dreams come true.


Nan
It is my world within a world, hugs.

Sunshine
I'm sure it will. Hugs

JM,
A lovely poem or lyric enjoyed the read.
And by the way I did recieve your lovely pictures. You do have an eye for the sky.
Beautiful dreamy clouds.
WWRS

scorpio
Thank you so much for the read and reply.

Nancy,
Oh I will, I will. Tea ready?

Maureen,
To tell the truth you make your own ending
depending on your internal allow. Hugs

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10 posted 2003-10-22 10:28 AM


Seymour~
I just LOVE your little huggy pillow~
This is lyrically lovely, delightfully done, a treasure of pleasure, a smile with the sun~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-10-22 10:46 AM


Marge,
Love your huglets.

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2003-10-22 10:50 AM


enjoyed Sey.  Hugs
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-10-22 11:05 AM


Gentle Spirit
Thank you for the read and reply.

Susan Caldwell
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14 posted 2003-10-22 11:15 AM


Morning Sy!

Hmmmmm...I hate dreams like that b/c I always want them to be real..

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-10-22 11:17 AM


Susan,
Well it's the next best thing. LOL

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