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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-09-23 05:02 PM

No Entrance
~ By Sue ~

She wrote a poem, at one time
One I would like to keep
It simply touched my heart
And fits me to a tee

My heart is hard to reach these days
For I shut the door and locked it tight
Then I threw away the key
I protect my heart with all my might

I opened it once to someone special
Into a million pieces, it got broke
To this heart of mine, there is no entrance
Listen well to these words I have spoke

Do not try to get in
It will not open up again

9-15-03

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-09-23 05:05 PM

I feel your pain. I too have felt feelings like this. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-23 05:10 PM

you expressed this well,,

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-09-23 11:03 PM

Before you throw that key away, be very careful about what you've locked inside....you might not want it there, long-term....

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-09-23 11:51 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I too agree with Ed, sweet friend, keep the shades of the window open half-way and keep the key in the house, as there is bound to be a face you can trust and it hurts to bottle up the fear and anxiety in forever! (sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, I wish for sunshine to come seeping through your window, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-09-24 12:18 PM

Sue, this is a very touching poem. It's
very heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Hugs, sweet lady

Ethel

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-10-08 07:54 PM

Yes...what Ethel, and Ed, said...heartfelt, and a reason to be cautious...

enjoyed this, Sue...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-10-08 08:04 PM

I hear you loud and clear, sweet friend--but somehow, the best laid plans often go awry! --you just never know what the Universe has in store for you!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-10-08 11:58 PM

Yes, take care of your heart, its the only one you have...and yet that would include at some point preparing it for new relationships...James

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