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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-20 08:52 PM

Take me up.
The sky lights a path for us.
Upon the foliage of autumn,
we embellish this swing we ride,
beyond the brightest of stars tonight.
Come swing with me.
Let our hearts be our guide,
our souls bared, intertwined.
We can soar like eagles in flight,
just you and i, high,
above the wreteched earth we can vanish behind.
Come along with me lover,
let's surpass the sky,
on this most desolate of nights,
longing to feel your life
deep inside of mine.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-20-2003 11:06 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-10-20 10:14 PM

and she says "Im just a shy girl", yahuh...

Inked...this is a very passionate write,
I can just hear you whispering those words
to a lover...

very nice.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-10-20 10:16 PM

nice mishy

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-10-20 10:21 PM

The picture you painted inside my head was mind blowing! This is beeeeauuuutiful!

Take me up.
The sky lights a path for us.
Upon the foliage of autumn,
we embellish this swing we ride,
beyond the brightest of stars tonight,
come swing with me.

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2003-10-21 08:18 AM

Thanks for taking me above the "wretched earth" with this.

I hope you never lose this feeling...

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-10-21 08:28 AM

Take me up.
The sky lights a path for us.
Upon the foliage of autumn,
we embellish this swing we ride,
beyond the brightest of stars tonight.

A love song of surrender if I've ever read one...and a lovely read as well, thank you for sharing. Warm smiles and hugs

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2003-10-21 08:47 AM

Makes me want to ride along on that magic carpet!

AND I come back to add that your picture just popped up on the re-display. Very nice, and I'm the first to see it!

~~J

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (10-21-2003 08:50 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-10-21 09:12 AM

ahh Michele . . .
the ultimate flight indeed
*smile*
a beautiful sight
xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-10-21 10:38 AM

Michele - behind the moon would be nice...

BC

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-10-21 10:57 AM

"longing to feel your life
deep inside of mine."

Beautifully written..but those words above were my favorite..

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-10-21 10:59 AM

Oh, the swinging-from-a-star kind of swinging! lol That is most definitely my kind of swinging!

I really enjoyed this reading experience!

To Love and Starlight!
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-10-21 12:54 PM

beautiful...one day I will swing

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-10-21 09:50 PM

to those who do
and those who may
take a ride up there
let your feet fly
there is no limitation
when we dream
beyond the sky

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

13 posted 2003-10-24 08:51 AM

Wonderful poetry....wish i was there!

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