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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-10-18 01:56 PM



From The Chocolate Monster

The Chocolate Monster is loose
She is running about the Internet
Looking for her lost Chocolate
Licorice bars of black
Cannot hold her back
The Candy Queen led her to the desert
On her Harley of Dark Chocolate
Saying she would find the thief
Who stole the Chocolate Factory
On each side of the highway
“PINK” marshmallow chicks
Chocolate mirages of melted ice cream
An arrow of Chocolate covered raisins
Pointing to a mountain
A mountain of Chocolate  
With an open door of White Chocolate
Inside a tree, a Chocolate Tree
Covered with Chocolate covered raisins
White Chocolate Bon-Bons
Chocolate Covered Cherries
Chocolate frosting at the base
Flowing like a river of Chocolate
Chocolate presents to
all that do read and add a line or two
Now Master Builder climb upon your throne
Wave your magic stick of Chocolate
Make me a Chocolate Factory

The Chocolate Monster
  

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-18 06:54 PM


This is really cute. I am addicted to my chocolate too. LOL I loved this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-10-19 11:12 AM


adorable write, as is your mind...loved this one Bon Bon!
Magnus
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3 posted 2003-10-19 11:34 AM


Bon Bon,  are we in need of a chocolate fix
this day?  My wife gets these cravings on
occasion....and I dare not stand between
her and what her eyes crave.....

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-10-19 11:39 AM


Bonnie,
Just gained two lbs reading this. LOL

Bonnie j
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5 posted 2003-10-19 11:52 AM


The Chocolate Monster is glad you have time to read. Now who among you can build me
A Chocolate Factory cause I need chocolate?
The Chocolate Monster

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-10-19 07:44 PM


Bonnie~

I shall take that challenge
Building you a chocolate factory beyond belief
The only catch is that we all
can come visit for choc-a-holic relief~

I'll make the walls of darkest blend
with almonds by the score
Surrounded by a vanilla moat
passable only by pecan boat~

The only fee to enter
will be a true confess
That chocolate simply
IS THE BEST~

Yummy - Yummy
all little fat tummies
will gather at the gate
testifying .... undying
love of all things chocolate~

We'll have little M&M sentries
to guard the chocolate walls
And they won't melt in the hand
of anyone who would stoop so small
as to try to take more than their share
of ALL THE CHOCOLATE THERE~

****Gal ... what a fun, fun write for this day~
This gal is a dark chocolate lover.
Throw in a handful of almonds and I'll move right in !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Bonnie j
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7 posted 2003-10-19 07:58 PM


Oh! Boy! Oh! Boy!
Marge to the rescue on her mighty stead.
Building a Chocolate Factory just for me.
Of course, of course I will share with thee.
Come all at PIP
Come share this chocolate delight.
So the Chocolate Monster will not give you a fright.
For at times she rides a broom.
Cause at times she's filled with gloom.
But now we chocolate for all
So let's have a ball.
Thank you dear Marge for our very own
Chocolate Factory.

The Chocolate Monster

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-10-20 10:33 AM




~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-10-20 10:50 AM


Hmmmmm!Hmmmmmmm! That chocolate's good!!!
Thanks, Bon-Bon!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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