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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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0 posted 2003-10-17 09:38 AM

Fledgeling sun shelters
under these branches of cloud;
will she fly today?

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (10-17-2003 09:41 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-10-17 09:40 AM

Ratleader
Good question, good write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-17 09:43 AM

Oooh good one!
Vry much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2003-10-17 09:52 AM

Today casts shadows
Clouds upon the drying ground
Good morning sunshine

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2003-10-17 09:53 AM

I woke to raindrops... but the forecast is for a good weekend... so I think yes! *S*

I like this very much, my friend... *S*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-10-17 09:55 AM

*s nice.

raindrops here, too...but fits my mood.

M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-10-17 10:03 AM

Sunshine is in sky
Here in sunny Florida
Where is it out there?

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-10-17 10:33 AM

Ed...You are very good at these! Love the thought of clouds as branches.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-10-17 10:52 AM

Soundings against wind
Highlights are but a glimmer
Sun showers reigning

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-10-17 11:07 AM

Good question.I want the anwser in a write also.

Crystal

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-10-17 04:29 PM

Well? *S*

Did she leave shelter
Peek forth from her hiding place
And soar through the sky?

Inquiring minds want to know. *G*

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2003-10-17 06:46 PM

I love a good storm, even days when the sun doesnt shine....it makes for great reading days...and pondering thoughts....hugssss

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

12 posted 2003-10-18 12:22 PM

Oh how I miss those sun days shining on me.

Loved this sweet and short verse of yours, Mr. Ratleader~

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