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Ku'uipo
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since 2003-09-25
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0 posted 2003-10-15 08:09 PM



His hair stirs with the touch of his breath
Tender lips lie slightly ajar
Watching while images pass through his head
I still daydream of the dreams of my love
The pillow he cradles in a childlike way
Innocence shone through
I want to capture his sleep
Hold it, keep it
Retain his perfection, that boy that i see
He feels my gaze
'love' he says 'come lie with me'
Nestling his face he breathes in my scent
Taking into his slumber the fragrance of each strand of my hair
Entranced by his lullaby
The beat of his heart sings me sweetly to rest
I whisper good night to the moon and await the sun
And pray that the dreams of two will become one

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-10-15 08:11 PM


Very nice...James
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2003-10-16 06:46 AM


Nice poem, warm and cuddly....:-)
I especially like this line>
"The beat of his heart sings me sweetly to rest"
enjoyed the read......ice


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