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Focal Point.....Duet with Self
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Focal Point.....Duet with Self |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Focal Point How many is an arm there’s two can eclipse the center place that’s you the warm from open door is one shining through the thin just skin touching gold of me and tracing lines and saying sun is in its rhyme And yet on the other side the cool from the window and other arm’s not fooled the north wind taps and pales its hold brings bruise to focus with turn to rose I feel the place of battle between kin first warm then cold I’m cut in half again my sides are split and I’m between the two to count this way I am a fool but I feel this keenly change half way and from the center I can’t help but say for reason because I just write this way |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wow! You two should get together more often for duets. *GRINNNNNNNNNN* There is Taoism in the image of the value of the space formed by two arms. I loved it; thank you for sharing. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Is that the trick? To have the dueling brains pen side by side? You don't give up your secrets lightly, but I understand the take of them... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
what a lovely intertwine... most enjoyable read this one...  regards sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martie: I applaud you the both of you *smile* first warm then cold I’m cut in half again what a beautiful line you are one amazing Lady *smile* xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is absolutely amazing, Martie. What a wonderful coming together in a single pen. Patricia |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well....you said this one was silly, and you were right! But even your silly has substance and beauty. Nicely done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent concept Martie... And you carried it off perfectly! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, this was really special, the way you did this. Special coming from a very special lady....  Hugs, my friend, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Are you sure you don't have two hearts or two little voices? (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is most musical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Obviously Dear Martie, you don't need any assistance from the rest of us...Your brain obviously handles multiple and simultaneous tasks quite well!! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This was very interesting, very different. A new way to look at things. Enjoyed, SG |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - thanks for the wonderful dual view - Paul |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grins adored this |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your muse always illuminates and enlightens me. Crystal |
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