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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-10-15 05:43 AM



Source Of My Dreams

You are my dreams
So please never leave
The feelings I have
I always want to believe

You have those gifts
That happiness brings
The harmony I feel
When a soulmate sings

You gave me purpose
As inspiration streams
The tenderness felt
In my source of dreams

You are the reasons
My dark became light
The dreams of hope
My heart began to write

HopeĀ©2003

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1 posted 2003-10-15 08:45 AM


The heart does write doesnt it? Hope~ you have done this with loving emotion and much soul... hugssss
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-10-15 08:52 AM


Thank you greeneyes for your kkind reply ....yes I know of no other way ,only straight from the heart

Hope

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-10-15 10:11 AM


HopeS,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-10-15 10:54 AM


Thank you Seymour , your reply is always appreciated

Hope

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-10-15 01:42 PM


You gave me purpose
As inspiration streams
The tenderness felt
In my source of dreams

these lines i found to be very beautiful,

a lovely write for sure,,

                                                                                   

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2003-10-15 03:32 PM


Harmony from shared and singing love-I see it in these lines.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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