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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-14 02:51 PM


An in-mate from jail
Adopted a cat
And decided to kill it

Little did he know
That this little ball of fur
Was going to come back
And get revenge

Now 4 years later
On the night before halloween
The man heard weird noises
Like a cat meow
he knew he killed that cat
Years ago
But he thought to himself
"Did the cat fake it?"

He went about his business
And then he saw
The cat he killed 4 years ago appear

He couldn't believe his eyes
The cat glared at the man
And with one pounce
Was on the man

The next morning
The mans friend walked in
The cat disappeared
And the in-mate was dead
His death was unsolved
But we know what happened
The cat that died
Got his revenge
And that was all


Cold hands means a warm heart

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suthern
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1 posted 2003-10-15 10:43 AM


Being a cat lover... I sometimes believe they do linger near us... to remind us that love shared is never completely lost.

Your story of one taking revenge is a good tale as Halloween approaches! *S*

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-10-15 11:57 AM


let that be a lesson to those who mistreat critters

a ghostly good write, Julie!

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
3 posted 2003-10-15 11:37 PM


Never mess with animals - they'll always get revenge in the end.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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