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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada

0 posted 2003-10-14 01:18 AM


Four limbs and a head and torso,
Five cards in all;
If all five are in your hand,
Your opponent will fall.

The great "Forbidden One"
Comes forth once again,
Created of my own darkness,
My own hidden pain.

Instant victory now
Is in his hand,
This monster destroys
The entire land!

"They say Exodia
Cannot be beaten,
But also that berries
Should never be eaten."

Thus I know I can win,
If only I could try.
I'd have the strength,
Had I the might to cry.

I stand alone now,
Facing the beast,
His power coming now
From north, west, and east.

Exodia beware!
I swear by my soul,
I'll find a way
To regain control!

Back monster!
Taste my steel!
The blade of my sword
Is so very real!

No! It didn't work!
The enemy's unharmed!
And now my sword's broken?
I'm completely unarmed!

As Exodia strikes,
I feel my body grow weak.
Is this Heaven or Hell?
I'll just take a peak...

Exodia? Here?
Am I still alive?
How could that be?
How could any survive?

But then I see it;
My attack saved my life,
My broken sword now,
Only a knife.

Exodia's gone,
But how could that be?
The unstoppable Exodia,
Beaten by me?

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

© Copyright 2003 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2003-10-14 02:26 AM


very good, sometimes we can overcome, even when we think we are weak we are strong when the battle gets tough.
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-10-14 01:10 PM


This is awesome Liam.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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