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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-14 01:08 AM


down
lying
biding time
to write in dreams.
colors,
they are all ready to take a piece,
a single bite,
and hide behind dearth
like insomniac child
from the morning sun.
sometimes
Saint-Saens and Debussy
scrape my body of the floor
reminding me perfection
for no reason.



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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-10-14 01:10 AM


uff, pathetic sry...
Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2003-10-14 02:29 AM


so true sometimes we all have to pick ourselves up. Sometimes perfection is not always perfect it tends to show us our flaws that we hate to see. nice writing.
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-10-14 03:39 AM


I hate it sometimes, too..
GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-10-14 03:55 AM


me too...

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Nan
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5 posted 2003-10-14 08:22 AM


Methinks perhaps you should hate poetry a bit more - Just dump it all here - We'll take good care of it for you...
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