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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-13 11:28 PM


I wake up in the morning
And open the windows
Hoping to see the sun
Greet me through the glass

But I opened the window
To see the grey skies
Looking like a early
Winter sky

The wind blows
And the leaves and pine needles
Fall from the trees
On the grey sky day

Cold hands means a warm heart

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dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

1 posted 2003-10-13 11:31 PM


hmmmm, cold hands mean a warm heart....if only people knew this.  good write.
pandonov
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2003-10-13 11:38 PM


is the opposite true too, i wonder(about the hands)
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-10-13 11:39 PM


Yea, that's the way these days get. The sky above turns grey, then black. A storm begins to brew, and a stranger appears in a dark cloak. Lightning flashes all around him, his staff now glowing with power from deep within. He says a few magic words and the storm becomes a raging dragon made entirely of lightning. The beast attacks a strange enemy in the distance, the mage speaking of vengeance, and... oh, that's the story of how I'll have my victory one day. :P Grey skies hide storms of all sorts while foreshadowing them. Grey clouds may rain, but only the black clouds can match my magic.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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