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Open Poetry #29

Heaven's Art

Kaz
Junior Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

0 posted 2003-10-13 11:27 PM

In my night of longing
You bring illusions to my heart
Through the clouds of drifting sadness
Shaped by the heaven's art ...

You formed an angel's presence
With a whispered voice so sweet
And wings of love to keep me safe
From the years of tempered heat

Your treasured eyes of beauty
Could see straight to my soul
Where in your touch I'd breath
And warmth seeped through the cold

You told me how you loved me
It seems like borrowed time
Now a memory in a picture
That reminds me you were mine ...

A love to be remembered
Straight from an angel's heart
Now the grand of all illusions
Shaped by the heaven's art

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-13 11:30 PM

I loved these well expressed words of beauty.

Cold hands means a warm heart

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-13 11:30 PM

ha ha (hatred laughs like french man and remembers better days as well) good onnnnneeeeeeee.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-10-13 11:33 PM

You formed an angel's presence
With a whispered voice so sweet
And wings of love to keep me safe
From the years of tempered heat

Your rhyme was absolutely lovely and so well done. I enjoyed this and will look for more of your poetry on the board. Thank you.

Carpe' Diem

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-10-13 11:34 PM

Kaz,
  Especially loved the first eight lines!
Wow...
                             Sadelite

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-10-13 11:34 PM

Very nice Kaz, and welcome to Pip.

And a thank you for the kind reply.

~wranx

Kaz
Junior Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

6 posted 2003-10-13 11:44 PM

Thank you for the comments, and the welcome. This is a really nice forum.

Thanks Mysteria for signing my guest book. That was sweet of you.

Kaz

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