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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-10-13 04:59 PM



Gone

I am but dust carried on the wind.
Vague traces of once.
Flotsam dispersed on a bay.
A memory forgotten.

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1 posted 2003-10-13 05:00 PM


a memory forgotten? not so my friend... at least not in this place...


Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-10-13 05:04 PM


Vague traces of once.

~*~

No, Scorpio - nothing vague
in or from you, ever...

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-10-13 06:26 PM


"Vague traces of once"..Never!

"A memory forgotten."...You?  No way...nope, never!

You dear scorpio are not that easy to forget.
Now come on over here...

~Smiles, Hugs and , Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2003-10-13 10:04 PM


sad sad sad....hugsssss hugsssss hugssss

smile smile smile?....

Lauren~


ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2003-10-13 11:02 PM


You reached invincible depths here...
Nothing more tragic, to grow us further than the cosmos. TD

scorpio
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6 posted 2003-10-14 07:52 AM


Thank you, Ron...I appreciate your kind words very much..

Karilea, your support and encouragement mean a great deal to me...thank you..

Your hugs and kisses came at a most needed time, Nancy...thank you for your sweet reply..

Lauren, yes I have smiles now...thanks..

Thank you,ThisDiamond for your comments...much appreciated..

believe in what your heart feels...

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