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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-09-22 09:49 PM

Thoughts doth spill
upon this page
born of love,
lust, and rage.
Tarry none
upon thy quill,
freely flow
this parchment fill.
Ride the wind
on wisp of cloud,
set with sun
in twilight’s shroud.
Bloom as rose
upon a bower,
pen a dream
in waking hour.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-22 10:16 PM

this was terrific,,,,

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-09-22 10:24 PM

Eddles!!! Oh my gosh, you DID IT!!! And did you EVER do it! I'm so damn proud of you. It's good to know you've taken a step forward. But remember to take it slow, ay?
I do love this, Eddie. You know I do. I love all of your stuff. It's so good to watch you go through all of your phases...Some are not so good, some are absolutely wonderous, and it's wonderful knowing that you are on your way to one of those wonderous times.
I'll always be searching for more, but take your time. I don't wanna make you feel rushed...Just comfortable

Aaaaah I'm babbling so much but I was so so so happy to see your name up on the boards again. -Humongous hugs- Love ya Eddleroo!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-09-22 10:28 PM

(smiles) Oh Edder, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, follow your heart and dreams and you certainly will have plenty of dreams to color with Crayola sunshine, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

4 posted 2003-09-22 11:53 PM

excellent, you have wonderful rhythm and diction. im looking for to reading more.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-23 12:26 PM

Thisis absolutely wonderful.

Crystal

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

6 posted 2003-09-23 08:54 AM

QJQ- thank you kind sir. i appreciate the read.

Lauren- one day at a time, eh? and thanks for being there, again. love ya

Noah- always a pleasure to see you here. you are indeed a kind a gentle soul.

mytuesdaywishes- thank you so much. i'm glad you enjoyed.

Crystal- Thank you. glad it put a

on your face!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-09-23 04:07 PM

I like this very much... penned well! *S*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-09-23 04:27 PM

Oh my, this is really nice Edder~
Had me drifting in and out of a dream
I dreamt not so long ago.

Lovely poem, all of it!

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

9 posted 2003-09-23 04:41 PM

Delightful flow of words indeed, well done.

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