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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-09-22 09:08 PM





As soft clear rain slowly drops
outside my window pane,

My heart and thoughts are seeing
the tears falling, dropping from
your pain,

Even though my thoughts are thousands
of miles away,

The spirit of my love is there
to warm your soul and comfort
you today,

Sadness my heart feels for you,
today a thousand memories race
through your mind,

What I wouldn't give to comfort you,
My loving arms to surround you,
like wings that bind,

Catching your sad tears falling,
like the rain of your heart,

Inside my hands they would fall,
your face, your eyes I would hold,
kiss and love every part,

My love I give, all to ease your sadness and pain,
Words of love and peace i send, to fill your heart again, and again,

I am here for you, my love, close your tired loving eyes, rest your head upon my chest,

Lay enfolded inside my arms as I glide my fingers
through your soft hair, rest my love, rest,

Sleep and be at peace, I will kiss your head,
all the pain will go away,

My love I send to you for the sadness of your rainy day.


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-22-2003 09:31 PM).]

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scorpio
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right...there
1 posted 2003-09-22 09:18 PM


Sofly romantic like a warm rain..

believe in what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-09-22 09:20 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a golden compassionate heart that gleams with sunshine that is bound to fill this special friends eyes of yours and bring comfort to GR's way! (big hugggsssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, you are a wonderful friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-09-22 09:28 PM


Thank you Scorpio and Noah! hugs!


Your replies are deeply appreciated!
Noah you are an angel!

Thanks~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-22 09:29 PM


your romantic words softly drop from this like a summer rain,,,

                                       

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-09-22 09:33 PM


QJQ thank you for your sweet romantic reply!

hugs



~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Jack- In- The- Green
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since 2003-09-11
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The green woodlands.
6 posted 2003-09-23 06:00 AM


sad writing but very nice,enjoyed it thank you.

Jack.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-09-23 06:09 AM


Jack thank you again! like the little owl cute! I see your from the woodlands!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

King of Hearts
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since 2003-09-12
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8 posted 2003-09-23 06:36 AM


I read your poems just to look at that
sweet smile of yours...wished I was GR!
man your the complete package.....I am speechless!

If he ever hurts you or leaves you DO I HAVE A CHANCE?

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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9 posted 2003-09-23 06:50 AM


My love..my life..thank you for these beautiful words of inspiration..you shine rainbow colours into my heart and onto my world...i love you my precious heart...love ..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

King of hearts..a little game for you my friend..rearrange these words to form a common saying...hell,chance, snowballs, you, got, a, havent, in..GR..

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (09-23-2003 06:52 AM).]

Goldenrose
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10 posted 2003-09-23 06:55 AM


Your words are perfection my love just as you are to me...you will alawys be in my heart my Queen of love...love ....

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxx

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
11 posted 2003-09-23 06:57 AM


Gold my love , rainbows are my colors of love I am shining into your precious heart after the rain has stopped. I love you more each day!

xxxxxx love your Vermilion Queen

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Goldenrose
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12 posted 2003-09-23 06:58 AM


Your love is my life...and you give it to me freely and with a freshness everyday my kind and gentle lady...may i alawys dwell with the soft enveloping, velvet area of your heart..love..

Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxx

Jack- In- The- Green
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The green woodlands.
13 posted 2003-09-25 09:59 AM


Sad but beautiful,i like your style of writing,i am new to this poetry forum but i thought that it was for writing not trying to find girls,king of hearts you should concentrate on your writing and not how the poet's photograph looks.
Whoever they are they are obviously in love and you are just trying to come between them, that is a shmeful thing to do.
keep up the good work on your writing ARH.

Jack

Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow.

King of Hearts
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14 posted 2003-09-26 01:16 AM


[This message has been edited by King of Hearts (09-27-2003 11:56 AM).]

angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
15 posted 2003-09-26 01:19 AM


This is sad, but also full of love, hope, and comfort.Something special that you two share is amazing.
Crystal

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