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vandana
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0 posted 2003-09-22 07:31 PM



If there is enough time
for us to say
If there is time
For us to fall
In love
All over again
If it is time
Let us fall over again
Maybe
You and I can sing a song
together
If there is still enough time
We can make a life together
We can make the things right
When the night comes
we can work it out
If there is enough time
Let our hearts free
and enjoy our ives
If there is enough time
For us to start
All over again

© Copyright 2003 vandana - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-22 07:34 PM


wonderful write,,,,

                                       

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-09-22 07:34 PM


vandana - time works wonders most of the time, I hope this is one of those times for you...

BC

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3 posted 2003-09-22 07:36 PM


If I could gift you all the time you need,
I would.
Enjoyed the write, Vandana.

Nan
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4 posted 2003-09-22 07:50 PM


Take time to make time - Nice sentiments, vandana...
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5 posted 2003-09-22 08:08 PM


vandana, I truly believe that if there is meant to be more time, there will be...

You are very good at conveying your thoughts and feelings in English!


EA

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6 posted 2003-09-22 08:34 PM


simple and beautiful, the way it should be. cheers.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

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7 posted 2003-09-22 09:26 PM


VanDana~
You pen with such softness~
Lovely dear poetess~
*Huglets
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-09-22 09:28 PM






(smiles) Oh Vandana, you have such a golden heart that deserves the most special love of all, sweet friend, God Bless You, He has a special plan for you and see in time love will forever sing in your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2003-09-22 10:47 PM


Hi vandana, this is lovely and it felt like a soft, romantic love song.

I hope you can find the time.

Huggles, Marti

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10 posted 2003-09-23 10:25 AM


Maybe
You and I can sing a song
together

~*~

There is always that.  
Very nice, Vandana...very nice!

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-09-24 10:59 AM


Vandana - I truly truly with
all of my soul
believe that nearly everything can
be fixed . . .
this is lovely
xxoo

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