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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
His love is more so much more than this pining- unending fasting dining on main course wishes no matter how delicious the thought was still strawberry sorbet fictitious It rained so many days & nights at the edge where I waited on cue to dive into creamy you- I was the cherry, & so very... My tears fell unworthily on his caramel tongue sweetly coaxing the resist from my kiss I'd kept tight fisted wrapped in bows in case you... I am such a fool. his love was more so much more than this pining- ~tier 10/03 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (10-10-2003 05:01 PM).] |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
wow. great imagery. it makes me wanna fall in love. again. lol. u should really use the imagery to your advantage in the future. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Exquisite words carved into a filagree. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* I'll keep that in mind in the future, Meg! ~Tier  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite... enjoyed the way you trailed off in thought.. beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks Mikey! I've been enjoying your latest works as well! Enchantress, thank you so much! *hugs* ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww this is beautiful, sweet friend, and I wish for this loves happiness to always sing in your heart and be the dessert of heaven! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, dear Noah *smiles* ~Tier |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tier, this is beautiful and so very deliciously written. Romantic culinary expertise~~!!~~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Magnus! *smiles* ~Tier |
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