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Rack-a-bye Rhyme
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Rack-a-bye Rhyme |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rock-a-bye Rhyme I rock a cradle of Hitchcock rhyme To wake upon some epoch time A litany of wordy dower Full of grace and flower power I fetch it up from in my core And dip into this well of store To serve it up, in seeds of time And let it peal in reads of chime It floats a wreath on the water Sails a while then sinks like mortar As lovely as a flowered lei Within your head a moments stay It lives its life like all things do Then disappears like I and you It is a flower of a sort It is a flower made of thought So lay your lei a river bend And let it float until the end. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"It floats a wreath on the water Sails a while then sinks like mortar As lovely as a flowered lei Within your head a moments stay" And those moments? The stuff poetry is made of. Love this Sy. And Good Morning!!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love your bloomin' rhyme, Sy...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So lay your lei a river bend And let it float until the end =============================== If I lay my lei here in my river's bend... will your ocean shore be its destinations end?      "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ A beautiful description of the perfect lei!  This is another fine example of your poetic talent. Perhaps you could edit your title "Rack" to "Rock"--if anyone were to search for this poem at a later date, it would be a shame if they couldn't find it. Loveya, T-Man! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-10-2003 09:39 AM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh Sy, what a beautiful write...the essense of something very special and significant in our lives,,,,you softy you...your poems grow with integrity and wealth. Thank you for sharing such awareness. Morning Sir, and how are we doing today. Happy Friday and wishing you and yours a wonderful weekend.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning write Sy! I shall move gently as I lay my words upon your lei. Have a wonderful weekend. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan My friend I thank you and have a good one. Nan, Thank you sweet and have a lovely day. Hugs JM, I could send Randy to make sure. Earth Angel May I place a lei upon an Angel? Hugs scorpio Thank you my friend. LeeJ, My wish is the same for you my dear. and thank you.Nancy, Thank you love, I'll be right there. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are just amazing !!! What a store of poetic perfection you run ! Always uniquely YOU~ P E R F E C T I O N ~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Just a little bit of you, LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So lay your lei a river bend And let it float until the end. ~*~ There is wisdom in letting things be... what they are, where they are, who they are... good morning to you, our Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Good morning love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I fetch it up from in my core And dip into this well of store To serve it up, in seeds of time And let it peal in reads of chime It floats a wreath on the water Sails a while then sinks like mortar As lovely as a flowered lei Within your head a moments stay Morning Seymour I love the way you reach inside your core to find your beautiful rhymes to share with us. Thank you, sweet friend. Heart hugs,  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Why, my dear tumbling tumbleweed, I'd be honoured!  Angel lovin', EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Thank you love, Earth Angel Then so shall it be. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Rhythm and rhyme are truly your middle name, sweet friend, this is a fabulous and fevered poetic luau, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. |
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