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youngmoeses
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0 posted 2003-09-22 03:57 PM



when silence is opened, genious is present
and songs are sung from objects i thought not to be alive/
when times forgotten it carries on only in watches
i let it come and go as it pleases,
life is a stepping stone, i walk and learn
to hold is to forget
what it was before you knew/
proof is only obtained through doubt
i faithfully hold nothing to fact
and as the snow flake melts and rolls into the ocean, evaporates into the clouds and falls on this rainy day...
i love it because i expected without anticipating/


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-22 07:19 PM


interesting write,,,

                                       

mytuesdaywishes
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2 posted 2003-09-22 08:15 PM


hmm....so many paradoxes, such is life i guess. cheers.

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

youngmoeses
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3 posted 2003-09-22 10:47 PM


s'cool, you see paradox i see things working together that we normally don't associate with unity...


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