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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-10-09 09:23 PM


Whose worth is worse,
Than any curse.
Whose fate is sealed,
In the eyes of life who kneeled.
My worth is worse than any curse,
Stuffed inside a hallow purse.
Kneeled before life my fate was sealed,
Soul slowly decayed and peeled.
And as Heaven shines on,
To Hell soon I will be gone.
Whose worth is worse,
Than the curse of Sardonicus.
Choking on my own saliva...

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

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Lotus Breeze
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since 2003-09-06
Posts 112

1 posted 2003-10-09 09:27 PM


This not happy poem, but good poem.
You wrong about worth, all are worth, but all have a curse too, to deal with curse and overcome is happy and great accomplishment

PoetryAngel013
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since 2003-10-09
Posts 7

2 posted 2003-10-09 09:43 PM


This is an exceptional poem. I know exactly how you feel and I can sympathize with you. But please note that you must not always feel this way. You should feel good about yourself because you become more happy. Extremely exceptional poem. I loved it.
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2003-10-15 10:02 AM


I know better...I know what you are worth to this heart...priceless...not worthless...don't ever let anyone tell you different
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