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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-10-09 02:40 AM


So simple
we instantly message
the truth we meant
years ago
now that we
are not face to face
we can be honest

makes you wonder
if half a life ago?
if we could have been this close
while this far away
and let this
machine
disect
truth
lies
intent
or maybe just endings

instead we speak
encryptyed
over phone lines
with silly little smileys
winking sorry little smiles
as we say lol
at things that
do not make us
laugh


[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (10-09-2003 11:05 AM).]

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angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-10-09 02:57 AM


This is so true.Alot of times it's easier to say when not face to face.We should stand tall and be able to express our feelings no matter the outcome.
Crystal

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-10-09 06:50 AM


yea, lol lol ol ol ol ol ol ol ol ol
when u really wanna say "up yours baby"
i know i know
been there, done that,
doing it now..........
glad i inspired              
lololol

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-09-2003 06:51 AM).]

Gina Culliney
Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170

3 posted 2003-10-13 11:44 PM


The age of aquarius has truly dawned before the year 2525, I do believe, Darkling. Well penned as usual.
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-10-13 11:46 PM


brilliant and rest assured i really did LOL reading this
pandonov
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
5 posted 2003-10-14 12:51 PM


this is cool really

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