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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-10-08 03:21 PM


I can predict
which flower you picked next
as beheaded I
spun to grasses greener

..in the end..

This new head
nature grew for me
your mere hands of man
powerless.


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-10-08 03:23 PM


Gemma~~

I was wondering where you were at!!!

Enjoyed.  

Susan

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-10-08 03:36 PM


Hi Gemma, girl. I'm glad that
you found your way back....
being beheaded and all. LOL

It's good to see you, sweetie.
Hugs to you, my friend  
Ethel Mae

NewEnglandlazurlu
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3 posted 2003-10-08 03:44 PM


Well, Gemma, this is quite the little poem! Beheaded, huh?  

Hugs, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-10-08 03:48 PM


This new head
nature grew for me
your mere hands of man
powerless.

YOU GO GIRL!  Great to read you again, missed you gem...what a read!  Stunning as always, thank you for sharing.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2003-10-08 03:55 PM


I'm glad I'm on your good side.
Wind
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6 posted 2003-10-08 03:56 PM


agh....I lo^ve this....

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-10-08 04:07 PM


AAARgh, kisses and hugs for you all. missed you !

I have sorted a lot out in my head this week (well, days)(lol) away...
To quote the beatles, it's getting better all the time.

Thanks you guys, GOOD to see(read) you.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~  Neil Young

Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2003-10-08 04:13 PM


the metaphor is compact and most effective...

...

now I may headed be
to the pleasures
of more words

Regards
Sudhir

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-10-08 05:35 PM


Gemma~
DELIGHTFUL girl you are~
We just never know what you're gonna come up with next ... BUT ... for sure, it's another winner !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

PsychoticBunni
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10 posted 2003-10-08 05:38 PM


cool word choice though i didn't really get the entire meaning. i like it any way. lol.

Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song

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