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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-08-16 10:46 AM


“IN HARMONIES ECSTASY”
~~~~
Mystery is but a touch of my desire,
as I reach out to one fair in
moonlight to blend,
but the days drift off as the
sunset falls into evening of
one thousand years,
and my kiss lingers on, as
you hold it close to not forget,
for the warmth of it beckons you…

Time moves mountains each dawn,
but it is an earlier morning
from whence you come,
for when the light is high with you
a pacific coast morning rises,
and seeking I, one of such desires,
a changeling would be of such…

You slip through my embrace
when trees bend to the breeze,
as dusk enters on this summer eve,
but a key is found of the mystery,
for when the stars melt
with the moon, and there is only
one left in the sky you
have found harmonies ecstasy,
…………………
and my kiss lingers on,
for the warmth of
it beckons you…
~~~~
Bill Charles

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-16 11:14 AM


Dear Bill, I love the ecstasy being a result of harmonies ...
your romantic eyes behold sweet mysteries. Beautiful poem!
Love, Margherita

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-08-16 11:34 AM


Elusive yet beguiling -- much like the subject...

-MVS

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Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-08-16 12:10 PM


Exquisite Bill...
Amazing how we are all under the same stars and moon..only in different time zones.
Much enjoyed this lyrical love song.
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-16 12:53 PM


b-b-b- beautiful...sorry for the stutter, but I was speechless for a minute. Wow..so preety as they always are.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-08-16 01:28 PM


You slip through my embrace
when trees bend to the breeze,
as dusk enters on this summer eve,
but a key is found of the mystery,
for when the stars melt
with the moon, and there is only
one left in the sky you
have found harmonies ecstasy,

If only we can hold this a bit longer, never seems to be enough though
so lovely, so you, once again

Aimster
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6 posted 2003-08-16 02:42 PM


bill,

beautiful!! most can write a romantic poem,
but few do it as well as you. this was so
touching, straight to the heart.
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

SimplyGold
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7 posted 2003-08-16 02:59 PM


Thank you for much for this. It is beautiful, gentle and tender.

An unexpected gift on this Saturday.
Thank you.
SG

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Saluting with misty eyes
8 posted 2003-08-16 03:25 PM


BC- Still seeing the visuals you so masterfully painted with this. I think I'll go back and read it again...

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-08-16 03:44 PM


with the moon, and there is only
one left in the sky you
have found harmonies ecstasy

when all else is starcrossed, that only special moment may be all to be savored, and be thankful for that, i believe, because everything, everything, goes too quickly anyhow

Patricia
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10 posted 2003-08-16 03:55 PM


And the lovely romance of your words lingers long in my mind, Bill...always.

Patricia

Jordyn05
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11 posted 2003-08-16 03:56 PM


Super poem. It made me cry.

Jenn

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12 posted 2003-08-16 04:54 PM


"Time moves mountains each dawn,
but it is an earlier morning
from whence you come"

beautiful!

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13 posted 2003-08-16 06:10 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, I miss reading your beautiful poetry so much, sweet friend, I believe knowing that we all see the same stars and sun worldwide that we are all joined in universal harmony and He holds the chandilier that lets the lights shine for lovers of the world! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana
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14 posted 2003-08-16 06:54 PM


lovely ,my friend just lovely
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
15 posted 2003-08-16 06:58 PM


I was in near ecstasy reading your harmonies!


EA

QjQ
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16 posted 2003-08-16 08:25 PM


romantically beautiful,,,,

     


NewEnglandlazurlu
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17 posted 2003-08-16 08:53 PM


Time moves mountains each dawn,
but it is an earlier morning
from whence you come,
for when the light is high with you
a pacific coast morning rises


Ah, I can see it in my mind's eye and it is breathtaking.

How I love to read your beautiful and romantic poems.  Hugs, Marti


Ivy Rose
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18 posted 2003-08-16 10:43 PM


Bill...You already know my thoughts on this outstanding poem. Truly a masterpiece of romantic writing. The underlying emotion read through the beauty of your lines.

***Ivy Rose

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
19 posted 2003-08-16 11:26 PM


You slip through my embrace
when trees bend to the breeze,
as dusk enters on this summer eve,
but a key is found of the mystery,
for when the stars melt
with the moon, and there is only
one left in the sky

Oh sigh, you have written my night for me.

Bravo BC~


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