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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2003-08-16 02:34 AM


thinking about thoughts
that drift from you 2 me
wondering how my heart
soft
fragile
and tender
couldn't be good enough
waiting for a lifetime
forgetting to remember
what I couldn't comprehend
too much hurt now
the kind only love can mend
and I know he feels it too
he gives what I long to take
and I know for certain
I'd do anything
for my childs' sake
wishing for a dream
too finally come to life
watching as he takes
another to be his wife
and sadly I turn
and slowly walk away
I hope he'll be happy
it was my only wish that day

~~Kings' Angel~~

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2003-08-16 06:47 AM


Very nice...James
ice
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since 2003-05-17
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2 posted 2003-08-16 08:53 AM


Julie

A theme of high emotion,expressed in words that form pictures of feelings in the readers mind....The content is pure poetry
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