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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-16 12:06 PM


I knew
without even thinking
that to
take you right now
would make things
worse

no matter how bad
I want it

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-08-16 12:07 PM


So truthful this is. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-08-16 02:23 AM


guess it depends on who
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-16 10:10 PM


would tug at the heart strings, it would . . .
*smile*
xxoo

Janette
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
4 posted 2003-08-17 09:18 AM


My mind is echoing what "passing shadows" said ... are you sure she isn't just playing ... hard to get?

Good read

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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