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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-08-14 11:40 PM


I thought you loved me
But you did not
You couldn't speak one nice word
You couldn't say, "I love you"
All you did was use
And abuse me

I am sick of it
Why can't you show me
The love I desrve
From you

Why do you make me sad?
Why do you make me feel unloved?
Why can't you communicate?
What happened to the love
We used to have?

You show me no kindness

Woke up sick of you
You stupid fool
And now I am gone

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-15 12:12 PM


Ugh, what a terrible situation..

Great write.

Bec
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since 2001-02-23
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2 posted 2003-08-15 12:18 PM


Hi the_loner_23...

Wow! Very strong, in a good way, of course. If this is really happening to you, I'm glad you realised things were going badly before it got out of hand.

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

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