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With Loving Desire
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With Loving Desire |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WITH LOVING DESIRE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ When twilight becomes, as the sun sleeps, your eyes beckon with their desire, and when warm skin is upon satin soft, a passionate flame does burn with fire… Thoughts are in whispers of sweet words, caressing you with each and every sound, and I hear you sigh from in between, for tenderness close will surely surround… When dawn awakes from its tepid night, and the breeze blows cool upon to chill, becoming is your warmth touching close, as my being aches with loving wants until… ~~~~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely penned,, |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...Another beauty of a romantic and passionate poem. There is a hint of seduction in between...which just serves to enhance the romance of this beautiful poem. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh, this is beautiful, but then I expected nothing less when clicking to read you. So pretty!!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-14-2003 09:08 PM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
You do these so well, mind if I use one or two to build a bridge to my wife?  Jason |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Bill, so enjoyed in the stillness tonight. I love your romance by candlelight. Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very passionate, the night is yours, Bill! But right now the only thing I wish for is ... quote:. Longing for cooler temperatures, which make an embrace DESIRABLE! Love, Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
touching close....been a long time .. Bill you always write so softly *s M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice words |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When dawn awakes from its tepid night, and the breeze blows cool upon to chill, becoming is your warmth touching close, as my being aches with loving wants until Oh yeah, Bill...  hugs  Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
When dawn awakes from its tepid night, and the breeze blows cool upon to chill, becoming is your warmth touching close, as my being aches with loving wants until… ~~~~ tepid nights, is love ever as sweet as on a summer night under the crescent moon, tell me, romantic man, is it? |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
As ALWAYS your pen is alive with romance. Good to read. Debra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mr Romance.....I love to read these they give me sweet dreams.... hugsssssss L~ The way you move me |
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