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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-08-14 06:00 PM


I hurry matters together here, because
I do not know when these thoughts
Will expire; or when the last of this
Passion will borrow from your very breath
to free this page from poetry's pen

© Copyright 2003 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2003-08-14 06:06 PM


*applauds* good write

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-08-15 02:12 AM


never lasts long ey?
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-08-15 04:00 PM


sometimes the words stop coming, too

nicely done

M

angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-08-15 04:02 PM


enjoyed
angelblueyes

Janette
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Chicagoland for now
5 posted 2003-08-16 03:35 PM


Sounds to me like you need to accelerate ... if you do not wish to lose her passion.

Good thinking ... go man go!

And good luck!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-08-16 08:46 PM


I do believe that your pen just stoked the embers!


EA

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-08-16 08:51 PM


Sad when it's all gone.
SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-16-2003 08:55 PM).]

QjQ
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8 posted 2003-08-16 08:58 PM


good penning,,,

     


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2003-08-20 07:18 PM



Ah, slow down Robert...we've miles to go, and daylight fades...and the blue pages, I think will be around for a long, long while...

vandana
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10 posted 2003-08-20 07:19 PM


good write
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2003-08-20 07:22 PM



...Exquisite!!...

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

suthern
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12 posted 2003-08-21 09:23 AM


Those embers can always be fanned to life again. *S* I like this! *S*
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
13 posted 2003-08-21 11:21 AM


Robert - at times the words disappear when writing, but not this time...

BC

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