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Deep, Deep Ponder Pool
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Deep, Deep Ponder Pool ~*Marge Tindal*~ Deep, deep ponder pool this school of swimming thought What questions asked ?What answers sought ? I know without a doubt you see there is no beauty in a hungry belly Be it child, woman or man No beauty on this earth can fill the need of seed as continual hunger dwells in poverty All the sweet music of the song does not fill a tummy long Does not make a warm, safe bed for the weary to lay their head For it's up to us you see to provide for those less fortunate than we God provides the best He can then He leaves the rest to man~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Marge...I wish we could fax this to our leaders. I will not get on a soap box here (although believe I could speak and write much on this topic). Suffice it to say, gentle heart, I couldn't agree with you more! A wonderful write, my lovely friend! Patricia |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is wonderful Marge. You certainly hit the nail on the head here. Love ya, Betty |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very wise and enriching poem Marge. very nice. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Tis great and oh, so true! Man sure doesn't seem to be doing much of a job of taking care of those who need it most! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, heartfelt and wise! quote: May we collaborate with God efficiently and with much love! Love, Margherita  |
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Lone Star New Member
since 2003-08-15
Posts 6Iowa |
Wonderful... Thank you Deb |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Marge, you're so right here.If our leadeers and humaity could understanad this and work together the things we could do.Nicely done angelblueyes |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely, Marge, compassion at its best! Hugs, Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Sweetie ... you nailed it ! And compassion begins on each doorstep. If just ONE of us gives to another less-fortunate this day ... think of how far we could go to filling an empty belly. I was inspired to write this a long time ago, by someone's post here at Passions ... and after following my own advice in my work at a feed-station for the homeless ... I realize that I have so much more than I need and giving is something I can do. I was able to talk my church into a program where each member family 'adopts' a needy family ... takes so little to give to others. Thanks everyone ... now, what are you doing ? Surely it has been evidenced that we can't wait for our 'leaders' ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...your heart shines through these words.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I tried to tell you how beautiful your words were earlier but your post kept timing out on me...maybe it wanted me to read you again and again and not give up trying until... ~sighing~ finally...I hope this takes hugss M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ Thanks sweetie~  WynterGal~ It took ... and I so appreciate you trying again. Thanks for the multiple reads my friend~ You're a real sweetheart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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