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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-14 10:27 AM




Each day we paint our lives
On the canvas of our dreams.
To some, it's modern art, incomprehensible.
Others see beauty and leap for joy.
these begin to paint their picture
Melding with ours, Blending more and more
Becoming our friends, our loves.
With a dash of hope
They paint brightness,
When all our colors are dull and dark and drab.
A splash of laughter
highlights each new day.
Pain and Pleasure mix
Until our painting is complete.
A lovely picture of
the way we were,
how we changed,
and what we have become.

Tequilia

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-08-14 12:35 PM


Your pen is a veritable paintbrush!


EA

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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2 posted 2003-08-14 02:16 PM


Your words paint the essnece of your soul.Artistically great here
anbgelblueyes

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-14 02:40 PM


true, very true

nice write

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-08-16 08:22 PM


thankx for the nice comments, im glad you enjoyed it

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

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