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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2003-08-14 10:14 AM


my dream is to encounter Patience's
chuckle of acceptance and
to smile back as shyly as possible—
without attempting any of the earthly tricks,
like an inappropriate locking of eyes

by no means will I look
around, seeking further
reassurance from any of
Heaven's other angels—
the exaltation will overwhelm me

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..circa 2003..Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites


[This message has been edited by Spiros Zafiris (08-14-2003 01:32 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-14 11:55 AM


Spiros, I have a friend who recently wrote of patience...I'm going to forward this to her, because I know she will enjoy this, as much as I do...
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-08-14 11:59 AM


I loved this!--and I love the theme! I too, have posted 2 poems on "Patience".

I enjoy the depth of your writing!


EA

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-08-14 12:06 PM


my dream is to encounter Patience's
chuckle of acceptance and
to smile back as shyly as possible—
without attempting any of the earthly tricks,
like an inappropriate locking of eyes

This is awesome!  I must keep this, if you don't mind.  You said it...seems we both have the same dream.  

I am going back for a few more reads now...then sending it to my library for times when I cannot find my patience. (hope that is OK with you)

LOVE IT!!!!

Patricia

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-08-14 12:09 PM


Ooops...forgot to put it in my library...because I wanted to read it again!  LOL

Patricia

Spiros Zafiris
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5 posted 2003-08-14 12:45 PM


..Sunshine..Earth Angel.. + ..Patricia../\..

..yes, thank you; as long as i retain the copyright....'tis a pleasure having my poem read and answered with such kindness;
thanks again..

../\..Spiros

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Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-08-14 01:34 PM


Our "libraries" here in Passions, Spiros, certainly retains your copyright.  It's where we place our "favorite" poems and favorite poets...

I have many walls in my library!  A few spotlights, too!

Spiros Zafiris
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7 posted 2003-08-14 01:53 PM


..Sunshine../\..thanks, also, for making me smile..


../\..Spiros

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