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TWENTY OR LESS...#142

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-13 03:41 PM

TWENTY OR LESS…#142

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

we kissed
and I felt
my stomach

in her eyes

from thoughts
creaking

farewell

as she disappeared

for all time

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

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where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-13 04:04 PM

I love your 20 or less..

Although I may not respond all the time, I do read them all..and find them to be quite appeasing.

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-08-13 04:53 PM

very nice write of 20

Cpat Hair

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Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-08-13 06:15 PM

we kissed
and I felt
my stomach

in her eyes

yeah... bud the pain in your words of late strikes like flint on the skin... no sparks, but bruises.. the kind that last a long time.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-08-13 06:45 PM

I felt this in my own solar plexus as well.

For a man of few words, you say a lot!

vandana

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5 posted 2003-08-13 07:10 PM

enjoyed

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-08-13 08:57 PM

seering pain you describe so well in so little

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-08-13 10:42 PM

Mark - you are a master at these...

BC

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2003-08-14 02:44 AM

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2003-08-14 09:14 PM

Meghan:  a sincere thank you to you -- I appreciate your consistancy and thoughts.

Thanks, Q.

Ron:  That image is actually apropos and memorable.  I guess some bruises never really heal...

EA:  not a pleasant feeling, is it?

Vandana:

Raph -- yes, seering... but now more just simmering...

Thank you, Bill -- I keep practicing.

passing shadows: ...yeah.

-MVS

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